Monday, 22 March 2010
Happy Easter vacation everyone!
Saturday, 6 March 2010
Second (and pretty late...) blog!
Point between beige dawn and smouldering tip
And then releases,
Causing an avalanche of ash to land atop faded
Sun lounger below by the pool.
Teasing dangling foot between railings, arm lolling over peeling wood,
You inhale, encasing toxic whisper
In cluttered lung, stifling a cough and thumping
Sticky upper chest with left coiling fist.
Out. Smoke seeps into air, cloud.
So I prune that smoke, and with latex glove
I push, ease, ease it in to the shape of tangled
Limb. Minutes ago you inhaled my breath, exhaled,
Inhaled again. Bit down on stained pillow
Where the lust of countless other pairs
Had groans, pulsating fit, and they fuelled us,
Touched their match against our feeble wick.
Now you silhouette under fluorescent ceiling strip,
The cigarette a trophy and the sweat sheen on your
Shoulder blades a witness of the memory,
And arch the nape of your neck.
I will forge your smoke
Into a sculpture of weeping salt sheets;
A postcard. Inhale. Holiday.
And knocked myself out.
I can see my favourite jumper
Unravelling
It's Inevitable
Looking at the fraying Ends
I think of all the time we
Shared
Just me
And you
My little bundle of wool
So i could never be scared
You looked great during the day
Kept me warm at night
Ill down the pen of futile love
And try to find a needle and thread
Instead
Bestselling author Ian McEwan said of him that; “There is a strong case to be made that James Fenton is the finest poet writing in English.His technical virtuosity is beyond doubt; his long experience as war correspondent, journalist and traveller has given him an unmatched range of subject matter - war and revolution, the dementia of collective passions, reflections on fate, and love - he has written some of the most beautiful love poems of our times. He is a poet of great emotional depth and wisdom. Increasingly, his work has a strong connection with song. He also has a taste for light verse of exquisite charm and humour. He is a modern master.”
This Poem; 'In Paris With You' touches on an element in rebirth that many of us must be familiar with; the rebound. Before I say anything more, lets here it, and since he'll read it infinitely better than I ever will; here he is:
Read the Poem. - -That recording was from poetryarchive.com, an excellent site, and more of Fenton's work read aloud by the author can be found there.
What I adore about this Poem is the way that Fenton can use language to surpass its original meaning. The words 'I'm in Paris with you' become (for me) a suppressed way of saying; “I'm in love with you”. I thought that the way Fenton reads this, emphasises this particularly. In the past I've always read it as “I'm in Paris With You” he says “I'm in Paris with you...”. This second goes against the natural trochaic rhythm but makes the statement seem even more like one declaring love.
But theres more going on in this poem. In rejecting the Louvre, the Champes Elysée and saying “sod off to sodding Notre Dame” he's dismissing a perception of traditional High Romance which is synonymous with high culture. And there's a certain soreness to this poem, made poignant in the word “wounded” in the first stanza, its downbeat humour even the broken images of the room, with its cracks and peeling wallpaper seem to make this poem all the truer, there is a lingering pain present.
Fenton also masterfully manipulates our vision as the poem zooms inwards in a cinematic manner throughout. It begins with abstract feeling, to glancing through Paris' sites, to their hotel room and finally the intensely intimate final stanza where the speaker study's his own physical intimacy (and perhaps feelings) with his partner's eyes, mouth and “all points south”
The last two lines are what seal the deal for me. The playful sexual glance southwards in this already sleazy hotel room, then coupled with that wonderful line “am I embarrassing you? I'm in Paris with you” leave us with a glimpse into his partners squirmish reaction and once again that beautiful line. “I'm in Paris With You”, is it a way of expressing love while avoiding cliché? Or merely geography? The reader makes up his own mind.
Tuesday, 23 February 2010
Our first blog.
The unfilled position has lead to Oxford University changing the rules surrounding the election of the Professor. Previously, Oxford graduates could only vote in person, at the University, on one specific day. Now, however, graduates can vote on-line over a large period of time. So, if any of you happen to be Oxford graduates, or are identity thieves with access to Oxford graduates, and have a vote going spare, I hear this Jake Holdsworth chap is fantastic.
Wearing baggy clothing of navy blue serge
We ask him politely, how to use the CD
As radio's tricky, and it's our first time.
He could have been helpful, polite, give a grin,
But he sarcaly dismissed us, said 'just put it in'.
Ah! What hope for humanity can there be
With radio rooms full of chaps like these.
Flightless bird paces clumsily
From nest to stream.
Leaning suddenly and leaning back
She stumbles, heavy on her tiny feet.
Water could mean death –
A helpless struggle through its depths.
But she must dip her beak.
Cold water’s life-blood warming.
She waddles home to young,
The sacred of the species.
They have wings and sharpened feet
That taunt, like hers; misguided purpose.
These are not predators,
These are Darwin’s rejects.
Flapping futile she nearly falls;
Balance needs to be restored.
Firstly, congratulations on your Christmas victory!
And, I know, technically, your puppet didn't get to number one,
But you and I both know that it didn't spoil your fun,
You made all the money you would've, and then some.
(I'd like to take this opportunity to emphatically state
That I have nothing against the contestants on the X-factor,
They're just the same as the next actor or singer
Who'd do anything to get famous
And shamelessly wh#re themselves out.
And to be honest, given half a chance,
If I could sing or dance
Or perform native American chants backwards whilst juggling cats,
I'd sign my soul over.)
But my quarrel lies with the culture you've created,
Where a songwriter gets shunned
For a dumbed-down
Auto-tuned
Uninspiring
Marionette
Styled by liars and posers
Chosen over anyone with any substance.
Secondly, though, I'd like to examine some facts,
Like the money you spend on botox
And getting your hands waxed.
(I mean, seriously, who does that?
That's beyond absurd,
And never before has someone so aptly
Polished the proverbial turd)
I read somewhere that you spend £24,000 a year
On cosmetic enhancement.
That's probably an exaggeration,
And media hysteria is at an all time high
But still, by no stretch of the imagination
Could I spend half that on cosmetics,
Frankly, it's pathetic.
If even half of what I've read is true,
Then if you gave up
Your self-obsessed quest
To be an object of desire
(And to be honest I've seen prettier things on a spit over a fire)
Then you could give over
A thousand people safe water
Or train 320 teachers.
But I don't want to be one of those people
Who preaches doom and gloom at you
But you can't deny
A better use of your time
Would be putting your excessive wealth
Into improving the health
Of so many people.
£10,000 could train
322 health workers
Or buy 909 chickens
Or raise Charles Dickens from the grave.
Okay, so that wouldn't have much benefit on a global scale
But I thought my tale
Of hypothetical justice
Would catch your eye more
If it rhymed...
If you take nothing else from my rhyme,
Take just this:
Do whatever the f##k you want to the music scene
Because as long as we have songs in our mouths
And tunes in our heads
You ain't got s##t on us.
But you've got so much power in your hairless, clammy hands
Yet you just stand in front of a brainwashed nation
And with a safe conscience
Spend fifty-seven times as much
As an average Zimbabwean makes in a year
On chestal epilation.
Act one, scene one.
Lights up.
Remnants of a fight and a cup of coffee cooling on the table.
We see a boy, side on
Eyes wide
His clothes hide bruises and cuts.
He chooses to keep his mouth shut and stare.
We become aware of another boy.
Older. Shown to be bolder
By his decision to speak first,
And although breaking the peace hurts
He presses on.
‘You alright buddy?’
A smile twitches in the corner of his bloody mouth
Which itches to give up
And scream and shout at the boy who stands before him.
He adores him.
Like brothers always do.
But when mothers always choose to leave
And fathers choose to only breathe
Thick white smoke
And it takes over the lives of their kids
Then how’s he supposed to forgive
Everyone and everything that apparently made him
What he is?
The younger boy stays still.
His barely controlled breathing fills the stage.
Still ragged from his beating.
His mind feels like a furnace
Heating every unspilled emotion
Every unreturned devotion
And sets in motion terrible ideas.
Deep breath in.
He clears his mind of them,.
Puts them at the back of his head
Until he finds time with paper and a pen.
‘I’m sorry’ he forces out.
His brother’s slow response causes doubt in his mind.
Will it really be okay this time?
‘That’s fine.
Don’t worry.
It’ll be okay
And hey, I’m sorry too.’
His brother smiles.
Places a hand on his shoulder
But his touch is colder now.
More detached.
And his scratched knuckles
Which used to protect him
Make him flinch.
Hopefully there will be more of that soon, but we shall see...
So, those were our poems. Hopefully we have left you satisfied and not lying curled in the foetal position feeling empty, used and sullied.
So, the blog isdrawing to a close, which is a shame, I've enjoyed it. Before I go though, some events which you should attend, some videos you should watch and some links you should visit.
Events!
Dan le Sac vs. Scroobius Pip will be playing at Leeds Cockpit on the 18th March, definitely worth a gander, I'll be there :)
http://www.myspace.com/lesacvspip
Polarbear is performing a spoken word screen play at the Battersea Arts Centre from the 2-25th March, definitely not to be missed, details here:
http://www.bac.org.uk/whats-on/return/
http://www.myspace.com/polarbearspoken
http://www.homeofpolar.com/bear-dates/
Tomorrow, in the school of English, Leeds University, an evening of Literature in the face of massive losses:
http://www.facebook.com/event.php?eid=321106647732
Wednesday, 03 March, Riley Smith Hall, Leeds University Union. An evening of music, poetry, theatre, comedy and more creative arts than you could shake a stick at:
http://www.facebook.com/event.php?eid=312066494722
Monday, 15th March, Packhorse Pub, Leeds. A gig, featuring Al Baker(acoustic folk punk as played on last week's show!), The Ruby Kid (indie-rap-poetry), Ben Childs (founder of Sonic Boom Six, acoustic-folk-loveliness), Elijah At Sea (a new folk band, featuring LSRAnthology's very own Humphrey, Chris and Jake.(Yes, these are self serving parenthesis)) as well as poetry from members of the Scribe and the world in general:
http://www.facebook.com/event.php?eid=320451282072
Links!
For more of Jake's poetry:
www.myspace.com/elliotdanielpoet
http://oh-youprettythings.deviantart.com/
For more of Humphrey's poetry:
http://poet-in-progress.deviantart.com/
For theScribe:
http://www.facebook.com/group.php?gid=2249623206&ref=ts
For poetry happenings in and around Leeds:
http://www.facebook.com/group.php?gid=281397778566&ref=ts
To see Jake get his head shaved for charity:
http://www.facebook.com/group.php?gid=173830489875&ref=ts
Videos! (I thought I'd leave you with some inspiration)
Thanks to Jenna for providing me with this link :)
